Here’s my revision plan! My peer reviewers thought that my document was fairly strong. They were a lot more complimentary of my Illustrator drawings than I expected, and they said that everything looked nice. One of them did say that I should add white borders to the smaller images on my cover to make it […]

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Revision Plan: My group members really liked my script and my ideas. I haven’t been able to shoot the actual video yet so they didn’t have much to say in terms of execution. They said if it all comes together like I explained, it will be an entertaining project. They said make sure to get […]

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I received some feedback today after showing my project to my peers. I have a pretty good rough draft of what my final project will look like because I am completing each leg of the journey in its entirety before moving on. So my ‘rough draft’ is essentially just a third of my completed project, […]

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After feedback today, I have some revisions to do. Some of the strengths of my draft are the different movies and clips I incorporated to give the video meaning. When I showed my draft, I was worried that the video was a little too cheesy. However, my group said that a little cheese was good and […]

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The strengths of my project that I plan on keeping are the current boards that I have. The design choice that was problematic was that Pinterest pins things so that the more recent pin is the last thing you pinned. I ran into problems with this when I wanted things in chronological order. Some of […]

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My draft showed the basic idea of my project, but wasn’t anything close to a final product. I think it showed my intentions well and it received positive feedback from my peers. It will be problematic for me to really do a good job making the transition from Ichabod’s diary to Brom’s narrative (if I […]

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What I did today: Today I added more to my script and brainstormed ways to lay it out on the page. The main chunk of my project will be the video news report, but I also think that adding additional elements to the page could be useful. One thing I’m considering doing is making a […]

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So for my project, the storyboard was hard to familiarize itself with the actual story line of Where the Wild Things Are. It’s been difficult to make it work, and I really don’t want to force anything with it. I still am planning on recreating the visuals in Photoshop. But, I think I am going […]

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Peer revisions helped me realize what about my project works, and what I still need to work on. The draft of the actual copy of my story was strong, and I probably won’t make many changes outside of editing for spelling and grammar. As far as design, my peers felt that it worked overall but […]

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Today I worked with Sarah and Ally on our projects.  Both girls gave me good feedback on how to present my timelines to the class and present the final project. Revision Plan move the info I started on a google presentation to a google doc make note cards instead of a presentation for the class…

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