Peer Edits

Today I worked with Sarah and Ally on our projects.  Both girls gave me good feedback on how to present my timelines to the class and present the final project.

Revision Plan

move the info I started on a google presentation to a google doc

make note cards instead of a presentation for the class presentation

make sure my timelines are horizontally over/under each other so Ms. Traci can easily scroll through the info

make sure my google doc and note cards cover the rhetorical material, style, and modes of communication as well as tie the two cases together