Since I have a 7 hour drive tomorrow, I am posting my updates today. I started to build my presentation on a Google document.  This will provide the necessary connections that show that the two murders, though over 100 years apart, are not so different as the system is as perfect as we would like to…

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Strengths: My design is definitely a strength, so I should make sure to keep most of the visual aspects. The only issue with design is that some parts may be a little bit too crowded, so I might try to work on spacing. Rhetorically: I think I need to work on making my story go […]

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What I did today: Today I added more to my script and brainstormed ways to lay it out on the page. The main chunk of my project will be the video news report, but I also think that adding additional elements to the page could be useful. One thing I’m considering doing is making a […]

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Today in class we got into groups and talked about our projects together. Everyone seemed to like the idea for social media mixed with the story of Beauty and the Beast. I want to work to make sure that the project comes together cleanly. I also want to make sure that all the different types […]

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My project is off to a good start. However, there are lots of improvements that can be made to make it even better. First off, some of my clips feature the Washington Nationals in different colored jerseys and playing against different teams. This could get confusing to the audience despite the broadcast running parallel to […]

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Revision Plan Today mostly concentrated on what I needed to get done, as I didn’t have much to show people. Everything I’ve got is in Word Document form, which isn’t impressive. However, by the end of the day, I have already put together my Prezi (with nothing actually in it yet, but it’s getting there. […]

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After discussing and sharing what I had so far for my project, my reviewer had little in the way of criticisms and recommendations as my project currently stands. However, he did ask how I planned to put together my video … Continue reading →

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Revision Plan After discussing my project with my peers, I have revised slightly the plan for my project.  I am planning to compile all of the Instagram images for my project over the Thanksgiving break.  I hope to create captions that tell the story and recruit more followers to the account.  Since I still have […]

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As far as my project goes, I don’t think there’s a whole lot of need for revision. The only parts that aren’t meeting my standards are the ones limited by the constraints of the actual tool I’m using. After talking with my peer editing group, we decided that the strongest part of my project is […]

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I am still in the midst of finalizing how I am going to do my project. I met with the other group members to go over my final plane before I start. They helped me with my project and offered their ideas and how to revise my project. There were some strengths and weaknesses they […]

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