Revision Plan

My project is off to a good start. However, there are lots of improvements that can be made to make it even better. First off, some of my clips feature the Washington Nationals in different colored jerseys and playing against different teams. This could get confusing to the audience despite the broadcast running parallel to the poem in the baseball situations. A way I found to combat this is to take clips from a WHOLE game broadcast instead of just highlights. This will keep the uniforms and teams consistent. The difficult part of this will be using QuickTime to take both screen recordings and audio recordings and putting them together.

I will also not be using text in any of the transition slides. Instead, I will be doing strictly my own voiceovers.