peer review and continuing on

What I did

Most of the work I did was to start writing out my web essay. I wrote out the introduction page, the first impressions page, and the interrogating the basics page. I took screenshots and incorporated them into my text.

Why I did it

I did these so that I would have concrete information for a peer review today. I wanted solid feedback about the work I’ve done so far and the improvements I can make.

What I Still Need to do

I need to finish my affordances and constraints pages. I have the basic outline for these pages in bullets, but I need to expand them and add images. I also need to make sure I address the modes of communication explicitly. I need to figure out if I need to reorganize my essay to specifically focus on the rhetorical situation and design choices. I have a lot of work and editing left to do.