11/21/14 – Pre-break work

What I Did

Today, I spent my 50 minutes revising my project. I went through the story paragraph by paragraph and edited it. I first edited for content, adding some to paragraphs that needed it, deleting a few parts, and revising confusing sentences. I then copy edited, looking for things like grammar and spelling.

Why I Did It

Since I didn’t get many major revision suggestions in peer review, the main focus of my revision is just fine tuning. Editing the story was a good start to this and helped me make my project cleaner.

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